Treatment Sheet (Part Deux)

My first draft of my treatment sheet was mearly the foundation of what is yet to come.

0:10-:26 seconds
Me playing guitar, setting up in my garden, looking all cool, nothings gone wrong yet.

0:26-0:32 seconds
Fly gets in my way, I get slightly annoyed.

0:32-0:43
Something falls off the shed, making my video look unprofessional.

0:48-0:56 (Chorus)
A tramp casually walks out of the shed. I am confused and shocked.

0:56-1:03
Tractor compromises my view, camera is hidden behind the tractor, I try to poke my head around the tractor, you will barely see me.

1:03-1:16
Ducks attack me whilst I am on the chair, I fall back, ducks continue to attack.

1:16-1:20
I put my hand over the camera, and turn it off, the blackness from my hand then turns into the other shot of my setting up the camera in the park.

1:20-1:30
Amp falls over whilst singing, I go to plug in the amp, and people take my bench space

1:30-1:40
People start to eat and get out food and newspaper, I struggle to play the guitar.

1:40-1:46
A man spills food on me, I go ballistic and get up from the bench and walk off.

1:40-1:46
I begin to walk off, fixing my trousers and then looking behind me.

1:46-1:49
I get hit by the swing whilst looking behind me, slow motion shot as I get hit and fall down to the floor.

1:49:1:55
I hit the floor, close up on face, still singing, and getting up

1:55-2:02
I sit up, stare at the camera in medium close up whilst still singing, going to get up, camera follows.

2:02-2:04
I stare back at the child on the swing, holding my face and swear at him, over the shoulder shot showing my hand gesture.

2:04-2:06
I have turned around at this point and I am faced with a parent, close up on the parents face and my face, filled with fear.

2:06-2:08
Close up of me saying the line 'I'll be okay' whilst looking useless

2:08-2:13
Camera pans to me running away from parent, and parent following, walking.

2:13-2:19
I grab the camera, it again is darkened by my hand, same effect is used to cut to the next scene.

2:19
Fallen onto a beach wall thing, singing to the camera, I lay my back down and sing to the sky, trying to relax.

2:33-2:37
Looks at camera, but see's a beach behind the camera. A look of shock and ore fills my face.

2:37-2:40
I point and jump around at a beach (camera only focuses on me) The camera then turns to the beach.

2:40-2:45
Me running towards the beach, camera is behind me chasing me, use of steady cam.

2:45-2:51
Close up on a single white chair, then cuts to me setting up my amplifier, ready to sit down

2:51-2:55
Long shot of me about to sit down, looking happy.

2:55-3:13
'I'll be okay' I fall down on 'okay' through the chair, everything attacks me, everything that I have mentioned.



Mention footballers somewhere
Construction on Summer house
3 MAXIMUM different shot angles, need to be good




TBC